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Illingworth Global Language Institute, great opportunity to learn English. In this photo you can see students working on communicative activities, having fun learning at every moment in IGLAI.
The Lord of the flies is a plane crash where the children are left alone on an island, with two leader’s jack, who only thinks about hunt and Ralph that maintains the reason and the security. Animal farm is a revolution that is given in a farm, Snowball with bright ideas and commandments, while Napoleon creating a plan to get the farm to their benefit. 3rd BI A
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DeleteThe Lord of the flies is ABOUT a plane THAT crashED where the children are left alone on an island, with two leader’s jack, who only thinks about hunt and Ralph that maintains the reason and the security. Animal farm is a revolution that is given in a farm, Snowball with bright ideas and commandments, while Napoleon creatiES a plan to get the farm to their benefit. 3rd BI A
Animal farm is a book that envolves to the reader in their characters in the effort that the animals make for get the freedom of their farm.
ReplyDeleteLord of the flies,take the atettion for the way of how some kids are influenced by Ralph and Jack with the only objective of survive in a desert island.
3rd IB "A".
Corrections PLEASE CHECK THE MISTAKES. THIS WAS DIFFICULT TO UNDERSTAND.
DeleteAnimal farm is a book that envolves to the reader inTO their characters in the effort that the animals DO TO get the freedom of their farm.
Lord of the flies,takeS the atettion for the way of how some kids are influenced by Ralph and Jack with the only objective of survivING in a desSert island.
3rd IB "A".
Lord of the flies begins with a plane´s downfall on the ocean, they´re missing in an island, where changes have been discovered like dark side of humans (Hunt & Kill), the main Ralph (democratic), Jack (authocratic). Animal farm is about revolution against humans, Snowball (Brilliant) and Napoleon (Feels Snowball´s envy).
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Corrections PLEASE CHECK JUST ONE ISTAKE AND VERY GOOD EASY TO READ.
DeleteLord of the flies begins with a plane´s downfall on the ocean, they´re missing in an island, where changes have been discovered like dark side of humans (Hunt & Kill), the main Ralph (democratic), Jack (authocratic). Animal farm is about A revolution against humans, Snowball (Brilliant) and Napoleon (Feels Snowball´s envy).
3rd IB "A"
Lord of the flies tells the story of a group of boys in a desert island, with leaders as Ralph (civilization) and Jack (savagery) in order to survive. Animal farm expose the rebellion of animals, the creation of “Animalism” and the change from Snowball (collective goals) to Napoleon (pig’s goals)
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Corrections PLEASE CHECK THE MISTAKES. NO PROBLEM HERE.
DeleteLord of the flies tells the story of a group of boys in a desert island, with leaders as Ralph (civilization) and Jack (savagery) in order to survive. Animal farm expose the rebellion of animals, the creation of “Animalism” and the change from Snowball (collective goals) to Napoleon (pig’s goals)
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ReplyDeleteAnimal farm is a representation of the cold war between U.S.A. and the Soviet Union, their characters were animals who rules their own farm, meanwhile, Lord of the flies is about a group of boys who get lost in an island, where they choose between Jack´s and Ralph´s way.
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DeleteAnimal farm is a representation of the cold war between U.S.A. and the Soviet Union, their characters were animals who rules their own farm, meanwhile, Lord of the flies is about a group of boys who get lost in an island, where they choose between Jack´s and Ralph´s way.
Animal farm tells about the revolution of the animals (animalism) against the humans, with snowball (the leader) and the napoleon (the boss). Lord of the flies communicates about the kinds and behavior changes of the people when they don´t know how to resolve the problems (Ralph: civilization and Jack: savagery)
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Corrections PLEASE CHECK THE MISTAKES. BUT THE REST IS OK.
DeleteAnimal farm tells about the revolution of the animals (animalism) against the humans, with snowball (the leader) and the napoleon (the boss). Lord of the flies communicates about the kinds( OF WHAT THIS IS NOT CLEAR) and behavior changes of the people when they don´t know how to resolve the problems (Ralph: civilization and Jack: savagery)
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ReplyDeleteAnimal Farm shows in a interesting way the comunism's problem, in the book referring to "animalism" with animals who want to be better than others.
ReplyDeleteThe Lord of the Flies, represent the behaviour of children without adult's supervision and with the opportunity to survive or die in a desert island.
Corrections PLEASE CHECK THE MISTAKE THERE IS JUST ONE
DeleteAnimal Farm shows in a interesting way the comunism's problem, in the book referring to "animalism" with animals who want to be better than others.
The Lord of the Flies BOOKI, represent the behaviour of children without adult's supervision and with the opportunity to survive or die in a desert island.
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ReplyDeleteAnimal farm is a representation through their character (animals and humans) the war that in this time the population had. Lord of the flies book, is a fantasy story, the protagonist are children who are forgotten on a deserted island by an accident, which must learn to live without adult supervision.
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You need to specify the country you are talking about, and protagonist must be in plural.
DeleteThe lord of the flies talks about a group of kids that were in an airplane that fell off in an island, they split up into 2 groups, the bad group used to haunt animals. Animal Farm talks about an animal rebellion against Sir Jhones, and after Old major's dead appeared Napoleon bad leadership in the Farm. 3IB A
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ReplyDeleteAnimal farm is a depiction of the Soviet Union their way of acting and how did they get with the standards stablished, moreover, Lord of the flies attempts to demonstrate a clear parallelism between Civilization and fierceness, the way people take this situation and the dark side of humans.
David very good as usual very difficult words even for me.
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Animal Farm is a book that represents the human’s darkness with animals, especially in politics at all around the world. Lord of the flies have the representation of the human’s mentality that could change in any the situation that they passed every day but have to face bravely and leadership.
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Corrections:
Delete1. Lord of the Flies HAS ( be careful here)
2. In any situation, you do not need THE.
The rest is ok.
Animal farm is an allegory book that described the story of snowball and napoleon that wants to get the freedom for this reason they do a revolution in the farm.
ReplyDeleteAnd Lord of the flies show a group of kids in order to survive in a desert island , their leaders are Jack and Ralph that search the benefits in each one.
Angie Achury 3 IB A
Corrections:
Delete1. that describes. not described.
2. Lord of the Flies SHOWS ( remember third person singular)
3. They look for the benefits for each other.
Animal farm deals with two groups of animals which are ruled by pigs with different personalities representing how humans would act in the face of the actual politics troubles. Meanwhile, Lord of the flies tries to represent the negative side of human beings at a pretty hard situation. 3rd IB “A”.
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DeleteAnimal farm, it shows to two porks, which direct to two groups of animals of a farm to take the local control and to take revenge as the mistreatments that received of his owners, on the other hand, Lord of the flies shows to children lost in an island, which divide in two groups and follow rules of his leaders, Jack and Ralph.
ReplyDeleteCorrections, Karolyn I found a lot of repetitions with the word TO in the first and second line specially, it made your writing redundant, also at the end, you misused the word HIS instead of Their which is the correct one, Check it please.
DeleteAnimal Farm expresses the idea of his author about how communism would influence in people’s thinking, using corrupt characters like Snowball or Napoleon that lead the Manor farm.
ReplyDeleteLord of the flies represents the negative and cruel side of people when they have troubles or do not have place to go.
3rd IB "A"
Very good not big problems here, but I think you could have done it a liitle bit more elaborated, next time.
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ReplyDeleteAnimal farm is about animals that start a rebellion against the humans, but the things will bad when the first leader was pull down by Napoleon when makes decisions by his convenience.
While lord of the flies takes two opposite leaders in order to make a representation of the society leaders, Ralph the permissive and passive leader and Jack, the strict leader that never think on the consequences.
Jonathan Correa G. 3IB "A"
Corrections: PLease try to finish the idea, when you say "but the things will turn bad" check please.
DeleteAnimal farm is a group of animals who fight for their “rights” but in the process one of the leaders became an autocratic animal and it start to broke rules of animalism and cause the rebellion. Lord of the flies is about story of a group of children who were lost in a desert island, so the fear and frustration of never come back to home cause that they lost the control of their minds as more as they kill to survive.
ReplyDeleteCorrection; be careful with 3rd person singular, " It startS" to BROKE , after to the verb is always in basic form in this case "to break".
Deleteit's about A story, of never coming back home, the last line of your paragraph is very difficult to understand.
Animal farm is a book where expressed the rebellion of animals against the humans, involved the news politics for the "Animalism".
ReplyDeleteLord of the flies represents an accident on the island, emerging two groups: "choir" and "hunters", but between the groups have a purpose survive of anyway in it.
It is not clear ,"survive of anyway in it" this is not clear.
DeleteAnimal Farm is a surreal book where shown the cruelty of humans toward animals, while the lord of the flies is an interesting book that shows us that children may think and behave as adults in a situation of despair.
ReplyDeleteBoth books give us realities that we are not able to analyze it ourselves and create awareness to change the human's mistakes to the world.
Fatima Proaño I. 3 IB ''A''
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Delete1. Animal Farm is a surreal book where it shows
2. While the lord of the flies’ book
3. Not able to analyze by ourselves
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DeleteCristian still there is no homework, do something please.
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